Category: Writers Block
Some of you may've seen this on grapheti already but I've added a second verse now. I also right poetry that is equally down and depressing so if you like this, I can post some of it. Sorry about bad spelling.
Sometimes you don't know weather your comin' or goin'.
enter the room of enlightment and leave not knowin'.
Give me a path to follow, no clue which way to turn,
Because on all sides There's a blaze ready to burn.
Every step every word, questioning every action,
always shoulders hunched waiting for their reaction.
I'm always in the wrong so long I've had to handle it,
I'm tyred of my nature but I simply can't abandon it.
just school and fuellin' up on others impressions,
I'm tyred of this emptiness, I'm tyred of these questions.
Gettin' shot time and again and can't figure these woond's out,
Inturnalise the negative and make the positive tune out.
Til I get to the point where I gotta vent this rage,
take a knife and slit my throat on centre stage.
Fuck them all with their lies and their beefs carried on,
I know they breathe a big sie of relief when I'm gone.
I never thought I'd reveal this dark side in a song,
I've misread myself too, I thought I was strong.
cause if you prejudge someone motherfucker your worthless,
You aint got a clue of what's hidden beneath the surface.
verse 2
I don't have the energy
to comprehend this group sinergy
to localise and socialise was not meant for me
so surprised so quickly fucked over and rejected
none with me one simply and I wiill be no longer messed with
you week if all you can do is wisper to ya mates
you got a problem don't stay quiet bring this shit up in my face
I don't stand on serimony fuck politeness
I'd rather be onnest than continue this nice shit
Stand in front a me and tell me not to ever come round here
at least I could walk away and this would all sound clear
I'm not searchin for universal popularity
I'm just workin' to get some fuckin' clarity
so I'll just walk towards the exit while you screamin' die slow
No longer stressed or depressed, your not worth it, I'll go.
Cool song. Sounds like something I would write.
sorry your so sad.
awwwa I just wanna give you a hug......
yeah, shame it'd never make it as a track for a hiphop audience but yeah, chears
It's really great, I totally feel the lyrics.
such complete irrational ugly hate makes me sick.
Well art can come in all forms and everyone has his own style of poetry so you can have your opinions but you should accept everyone's poetry. How boring would that be if everyone would only write about nice things?
I should accept everything? hmmm no... I would never be so facetious or arrogant as to expect everyone, to like everything, I've wriiten the idea is impossible and ridiculous....
Well of course saying opinions about poems is great, but you should choose the right words I think. If you had said "well, it's a bit too dark and hateful for me", that'd be totally okay.
its a good poem. it relates to me at some point.
I think it relates to everyone at some points.